This short story could a great tv series live or animated.

Any chance for a part 3 ?

Isn't it nice that the two cultures share a common language?

Thank you. I really enjoyed both episodes

Thank you for this interesting and entertaining story. Please keep up your great work.

Zarklith facilitated the birth of a United Federation of Planets. Hmmmm....

....and the Spartans became just another Greek...

Excellent story!

Parts 1 and 2 were great. Now I've got to decide how to best view the full array of Sci-Fi Guy's sci-fy fantasy stories. Right now they are fantasies, who is to say they will forever be? But one thing for sure, these stories will be some of my favorites.

I really enjoyed this story ☺️

Very entertaining thank you

Diplomacy and exchanges do not woek so easily

"orbiting a ... nebula". Yeah, probably not.

Another one please!!

Like the premise is interesting but it's basically you just repeating "human smart zeltron strong" for half an hour.

Would make for a cool movie.

Should do a part 3 alliance war

Thanks

Zarklith is quite the lad, isn’t he? Nice that a non-human leads this cooperative initiative. But since he is military and involved in driving substantial change, the story might be improved by adding in his protector, his “rabbi”, a superior who both advises and defends him, something necessary in any military role initiating change. The narration is quite good - neither too fast or slow, with very clear pronunciation. The writing is equally good, although there appears to be a fondness for the word “palpable”, which I have noticed in other stories, in this one repeated three times. Should a possible joint school like the one in this story ever come to pass, one would hope to avoid the horrors made possible by the American “School of the Americas”, which indeed delved into the military training of disparate cultures, counting as its alumni South American graduates who went home to fight Communism by successfully organizing genocides, dictatorships and death squads. These graduates were also taught “enhanced” interrogation techniques equivalent to torture.one would hope that the humans of the future will have morally evolved past the use of such practices. With all of that said, these stories are well worth a listen, and I recommend them.

Reminds me of Halo and the Sangheili.

Bro was this written by the Ai as well? if so this is amazing....almost scarily so...

I'm sick of this woke shit 😮