"..weaponized gunships.."?? It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!

When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.

88 I am a veteran of combat, the closing words by the commander have never been truer!

Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!

That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.

I really like your story. I'm a vet, and a lot of what you said in the story is true to how a soldier is and will do. Be blessed. 88.

This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔

Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.

America, we are failing miserably........

I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao

They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.

He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.

I recommend taking it down, then change Bajoran into something else and reupload it, otherwise you might have Paramount knocking on your door with a lawsuit. Bajor is a planet in the Star Trek universe and Bajorans are a rather prominent species in said universe.

Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women. Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.

I swear, if they try to ban my railgun I will go postal 😆 Good story.

45:05 then 46:05 erm.. your AI needs to stop smoking weed

They throw a few rockets at themselves and blame whoever it is they want to invade at the time..........

Put two pictures side by side and tell me he ain't.........

Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂

seems like the AI got stuck in a loop when writing the end.

88. This was an amazing story. No truer words could have been spoken near the end.

The Bajoran Wormhole is now secured by Captain Benjamin Sisko. Lets hope the Cardassians dont join the Dominion.

Humvee's far in the future? They wouldn't have made anything different by then?

Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 1 to 10, I give it a 10. It was so interesting I tried to imagin in my mind how every action and order was taken place. Even trying to picture the girl with the doll.

Good tale! Keep the good Work. Thankyou

Sea, air, land...seal.........

Plato once ssid., you can tell a nation's worth, by how it treats it's veterans..........

Odd. They won the battle, and rather than reinforcing their positions, they all went home to Earth. Sounds like American doctrine during the Vietnam War.

Navy rail guns prove, Gaia is not round.... . L

Bajorans getting their asses kicked? Sign me up.

The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.

There were indeed a lot of errors in this story, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And that is what I came here for, entertainment. Thanks. However, I hope to see less errors in the future, despite them, I liked it.

0:24 "the humans had been providing humanitarian aid" yeah that sounds like a very human thing to do

Pigs make food scraps into bacon. If pigs could fly humanity would worship them. I love bacon!

how many times are their eyes gonna get filled with an adjective....Grammarly, where are you when you are needed most

the end of the battle repeated itself twice, then the aftermath of the battle repeated itself twice.

I am a new subscriber...88...and I am really enjoying your stories. Thank you!!! Don't listen to the nay sayers, this is good listening!!!

Some reptilians can fly and have wings...we too can fly, without wings.......

He was adopted...biological father is George s. Patton...

88 just found your series and i love it, i dont know how many you have written but i plan on listening to them all

45:05 and a minute later schroedinger doll

Not flat....a lot bigger than we know.........blood don't look blue, until it dries...

A mention of a race of beings from Star Trek Deep Space Nine right at the beginning.

To all you critics...bite me, it is what it is.........

When u attack someone and lose. Your not returning for revenge. Revenge implies something was done wrong to u. But attackers r the ones doing the wrong ones so ya

Was this story generated by A.I.? Just curious, because it tracks like an example of a high-school students attempt at creative writing.

Can even tell you, who set the charges........

Very soon, we'll remember who we are........

Great story 👏👏👍👍

I was planning to listen to more stories on your channel . But, the titles and descriptions make them seem so similar as to be almost the same.

Bajoran? DS9 gonna be calling.

Bajor? They're from DS9

we'll grant you eight feet, plus as much as you're taller, of land that the sons of terra will hold

It is a wonderful example of AI, can't be bothered editing, and used before lines, woven together with no idea of originality.

Gauss and rail guns… nope not really. They are similar tech in that a projectile is accelerated using electricity that’s the flow of electrons. Also what was the arm length shell casing for that was ejected and was hot as fuck? You know that means that the projectile and casing making up the entire round was now 60cm or 2 feet plus in length and then the stock is a 30cm action 10cm and barrel say 4 times the projectile for 80cm gives a gun of 180cm or 6 feet long min and that’s not enough barrel anyway since you would need a few thousand G’s to go from rest to Mach 5 and above for hyper speed.. and your soldier has recoil = to mass x acceleration. So he is dead, torn appart. So since the two types of guns are very very very very different. Gaus uses a series of magnetic coils to pull and push the projectile of ferris metal along the Rail gun the easier and lighter and more powerful for less energy version uses two parallel rails as the barrel and a conductive projectile sits between them and then a huge electrical current goes up one rail through the projectile and down the other rail and a force is produced that makes the projectile go fast. By fast I mean that the battleship sized ones that are already developed by the USA shoot projectiles at over mach 10. Rail guns are many times lighter that a gaus gun, rail guns use less electrical energy to get the same mass moving at the same speed as a gaus gun. Rail guns are a very far much simpler device since it’s just load and flip the power switch but gaus guns need timing and power modulation of the electromagnetic coils as a projectile going at Mach lots would need exceptional timing of the coils. I say all that knowing that the power supplies for these things are the limit. Sure you can have a nuclear reactor to power one but that isn’t man portable and how do you connect that much juice to a hand held gun? My point is that if you’ve go the juice then a rail gun gets more shots off for the same charge / power supply, it’s a lighter gun so you can carry more ammo, it’s simple by comparison. The ONLY thing is that the gun rails can and do wear with use just like a chemical gun. So a military would be carrying only one type of these guns since they are not compatible except maybe ammo (gsus ammo must be magnetic/ferrous though). They do the same thing but different ways one is cheap and easy the other is expensive and complicated and an army would only go one way not both. And there is no shell casing.

Cool story. Where is the picture from. I'd swear that's Vinnie Jones as Greg

no quarter - the oriflamme has been raised

The assumption that the galaxy is consumed by darkness is irrational. But it is fantasy I guess.

Do not keep that Bajoran name in anything you have because Paramount owns Star Trek and they may come after you.

His bday...4:20........

Do you actually KNOW what DU or Depleted Uranium projectiles do? Well for one thing they are not is just a heavy bullet or dart or thing to just hit another thing. That’s a massive waste of time and effort of manufacturing. You see Uranium and Zirconium and 3 other metals when compressed or heated up to melting point and compressed so that when cool they are above 95% compaction (maybe a bit more even) , that’s almost a perfect atomic lattice, if that projectile then shatters by a force that hits at over 1400 feet per second fps then the atomic lattice breaking appart releases more energy as heat and IR than actually burning the metal as a fine powder in enough oxygen that it all burns and almost instantly. How hot? How fast? 6000°C up to 10000°C and in just a few milliseconds. But really the energy release starts at the exact time with no delay from when the first crack happens. This is not like incendary rounds that don’t start to burn until a meter or more past the initial impact point. So how is this good? So DU rounds in an A10 tank killer are 30mm cannon rounds. These hit a tank armour and yes they are heavy and extremely dense, then the actual force of hitting the tank cracks a bit off the bullet tip and that heat released melts the tank armour just a bit. Now the very dense bullet continues on into the little molten pool of armour and pushes it away and continues to peel shattered microscopic thin layers of DU from the bullet nose. The heat builds absurdly rapidly and the bullet tip area is far above 5000°C and melting its way through the armour. The term melting is a lie really as when 6000°C is attained the metal armour is now a plasma. Not a solid, melted into a liquid and then heated until the steel boils but heated till above 6000°C then all the electrons get stripped and you have a charged plasma cloud of armour being pushed out of the way as the bullet drills through. The limit of penetration is the size of the bullet in length which also dictates its width and its impact velocity. When through the damaged DU bullet bursts into the tank interior DRAGING everything in its wake through the impact hole. Yes all that plasma and shattered bullet fragments get dragged inside the tank through the entry hole. The shattered bullet fragments still keep peeling off DU layers on their own without further impacts as the peeling layers cause shattering to peel off the next layer. Then all this mess superheats the entire inside of the tank to about the surface of the sun people burn until no O2 remains then carbonise, tank ammo explode as if the primer is struck, the turret blows up up up and away and then the fuel tank ignites. Oh the damaged bullet no longer supported within the entry hole hits the far side of the tank inside it and instantly shatters the remaining fragments in one go releasing all the rest of the shattering energy. So now we have a superheated tank inside with UNBURNT DU pieces and dust with no oxygen anymore. The top blows off and the horrendously hot plasma doubling as air in the tank blows out and mixes with real air. So the air plasma DU dust mix cools and cools and then the O2 in the air ignites the DUndust and particles and they burn fast. Ungoddessly fast since reactions happen faster with elevated temperatures and just below 6000°C the electrons rush back to the charged nucleus which allows chemical reactions/bonds to happen again. Then well then oxidation a very exothermal reaction happens very fast due to heat and the very good mixing of air and plasma as it cooled down. Boom there she is. This happens just as the plasma exits the top of the tank. That’s EXACTLY how the tank fired kinetic penetrators that look like long darts work. So tungsten and DU darts are silly in combination. DU round pellets for no armour or short darts for light aircraft armour and hitting above mach 1.5. Or heavy tungsten slugs about twice the density of lead and HARD below mach 1.5. That’s how you do it and you k ow if you have a fast or slow missile at the start.

88: did he keep the rag doll or give it back to the girl?

Not as many pure blood humans as you think.........

Kinda like superman.........

Someone has infantry training, on the writing staff. I recognize certain terminologies.

Bajoran? Reptilian? Has the AI that wrote this piece run out of names and species for extraterrestrials?

Bajoran sounds like a name plucked from Star Trek Deep Space Nine.

Must have been the Maquis

I always thought Bajoran's were just religious nutters who complained about the Federation and got occupied by the Dominion. 😂

Humans are God's.........like our father/ mother is..........we have the God particle.........

Is this available on audio book?

Blue blood, not purple...copper base...humans are iron base.........

67 miles.........

how do I know which was the one that came before this one?

F38 raptors...

No curvature.........

Is this an opportunity to boink young major Kira??😮😮😂😂😊

Thank you for your story, thank you 88 times.

Is there a way to turn off the text? I have subtext off, but the laughably bad text continues.

last i checked bajorans arent reptiles...

You own the air, you own the war.......

Towe missiles...

i keep laughing every time thinking ds9

The great awakening, is our DNA is awakening.........

LOL well that wasted 36 minutes

The Humans thought that world was theirs?

88 i read this book years ago thanks for reminding me

Bajoran? So, yeah, that's a Star Trek species that was invented by them. You're gonna get sued.

The only surprise in this story is that the bad guys are called Bajorans. There’s no nuance here.

Morphine? Is this WWII?

Not bad for a short story.

yes war make no real winner only surviors

If the text wasn't there then I might actually enjoy the stories. But, like very other one they make, the text has repeated grammar errors and is completely out of sync. I'll listen because some of the stories are actually good to listen too. When they are out of sync with so many errors though, I'm just going to give it a thumb down for being too lazy to do it right. That on you guys. What country do you guys think do this channel?

This is definitely AI generated

Why 88? What does 88 stand for?

Dead ends will open.........

Why, oh, why can't these authors think of new names. I, too, write, and when I have to name a person, race, or planet, I just make up the name, roll the dice on the letters. Then I put it in Google translate to make sure it isn't a swear word in any other language, then in google,proper to make sure it isn't a name in a popular book, series or film.

Well, l enjoyed the story. I realize that you used terms this age would understand. Everyone seems to be a critic, but l dont see any links to their stuff. You keep doing what you're doing, but make up your own races and planetary names. 😂

Ours is but to do and die , we are not to wonder why.

yeah guys, make up original race names, especially don't steal from Paramount or lucasfilm.