How to Show, Not Tell: The Complete Writing Guide
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День тому“Don’t tell me the moon is shining. Show me the glint of light on broken glass.” - Anton Chekov
Writers often have different definitions of “showing” and “telling.” I define “telling” as any time in the story when an important moment lacks depth in terms of detail or narrative voice. However, telling can also be an excellent tool for controlling the story’s pacing and delivering important information.
In this video, I’ll explore the origins of this advice and why “showing” appeals to audiences on an emotional level. Using examples from popular works and advice from published authors, I’ll outline six strategies you can employ to produce stronger writing:
1. Use evidence to support your claims.
2. Replace the abstract with the concrete.
3. Substitute vague descriptions with specific sensory details.
4. Avoid relying too much on body language.
5. Show emotion through dialogue.
6. Filter observations through the narrative voice.
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SOURCES
“The clues to a great story” TED Talk by Andrew Stanton:
www.ted.com/talks/andrew_stan...
“Creative Writing and the New Humanities” by Paul Dawson:
books.google.com/books?id=r2N...
“The Craft of Fiction” by Percy Lubbock:
www.gutenberg.org/files/18961/...
“Nuts and Bolts: ‘Thought’ Verbs” by Chuck Palahniuk:
litreactor.com/essays/chuck-p...
Novel Writing Help blog by Harvey Chapman:
www.novel-writing-help.com/pr...
“How Fiction Writers Can Show Emotions in Their Characters in Effective Ways” by Robin Patchen:
www.livewritethrive.com/2015/0...
“Show, Don’t Tell: What You Need to Know” by Jerry Jenkins:
jerryjenkins.com/show-dont-tell/
Gail Carson Levine’s blog:
gailcarsonlevine.com/blog/201...
Delilah Dawson’s Twitter feed:
/ 1086657712518299650
Stewie Writes:
www.stewiewrites.com
More great literary examples on Reedsy:
blog.reedsy.com/show-dont-tell/
“Understanding Show, Don't Tell: (And Really Getting It)” by Janice Hardy:
www.amazon.com/dp/B01M0BE4UP/...
“The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Expression” by Becca Puglisi and Angela Ackerman:
www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07...
Introduction (0:00)
The Origins of "Show, Don't Tell" (3:53)
1. Use Evidence to Support Your Claims (5:38)
2. Replace the Abstract with the Concrete (7:20)
3. Substitute Vague Descriptions with Details (10:09)
4. Avoid Relying Too Much on Body Language (12:09)
5. Show Emotion Through Dialogue (15:32)
6. Filter Observations Through the Narrative Voice (17:51)
Summary (21:51)
Writing Exercise (26:00)
@nicewords5377 3 роки тому
With a heavy sigh that sounded like the first shift of snow before an avalanche, he clicked out of UKposts and without a word, made his way noiselessly to his writing room. He shut the door and set about a serious edit of his first draft...
@c.9231 3 роки тому
After watching what he could only describe as UKposts’s most inspirational treatise on writing, the young man leapt from the sofa and raced to is room. He felt little guilt for spilling his soda or waking Lily, his mom’s Pomeranian. After all, his masterpiece awaited editing.
@emmanuelo2941 3 роки тому
@@c.9231 As he began to review his draft, he dreaded the work that was to be done. Now, anything and everything looked like errors. His inner psyche screamed, letting the last of his frustration out, as he finally put his fingers to work.
@wallflxwer3810 3 роки тому
@@emmanuelo2941 And with the sight of inspiration written in his eyes, his fingers move dashingly as he typed. A multitude of ideas started to flood into his mind. The sound of clacking could be heard throughout the whole entire house, until suddenly it stopped. . .
@derederesan_5539 3 роки тому
Loud scratching noises were heard just outside of his door. His typing slowed as he waited for the scratching to stop. To his dismay, it only worsened. Whatever stood behind started pounding on the door after emitting a low growl. He stood from his chair and picked up his baseball bat, wary of the unknown being. The pounding of his heart didn't cease, but sped up as he approached the closed door. He raised the baseball bat and kicked the door down, taking the thing by surprise. He frowned when he realized who it was.
@andynonymous6769 2 роки тому
She didn't care that there was only a couple hours before the assignment was due, she had to watch more videos about how to write good
@PunkWad 3 роки тому
Everyone: here to write a novel. Me: mmmm fanfiction
@sophied1703 3 роки тому
MMMMM
@winterrain1947 3 роки тому
Or dumb short stories for school.
@JuliaFerreira-zr7pq 3 роки тому
Tbh, I WISH more fanfic writers did this kind of research.
@winterrain1947 3 роки тому
@@JuliaFerreira-zr7pq Agreed! I know there are some really really good fanfictions out there though. People sometimes start out really badly, but they get better.
@JuliaFerreira-zr7pq 3 роки тому
@@winterrain1947 For sure! It's just sad to see such good ideas not have the tools to become great stories. Not to mention how tiring it can be, as a reader, to go through so many bad ones to find the hidden gems.
@enjay86 2 роки тому
The hardest thing, imho, is to not overthink it. Too much showing can toss me out of the story when there are way too many fluffy words for describing simple objects. But thousand readers = thousand flavours I guess :) Great and inspiring video btw, thank you for it
@QuotidianWriter 2 роки тому
I absolutely agree! Thank you so much for your kind words. Keep writing. :)
@thenoobalmighty8790 Рік тому
Like blanus what is this? Yeah they just faff about with words to sound good and clever
@thenoobalmighty8790 10 місяців тому
Omg yeah. We should just BURN all the books, apart from science books.
@thenoobalmighty8790 10 місяців тому
If i was rich, i would buy millions of copies of Greta Thornburgs books, and burn them all in a big fire just to annoy her HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
@galehunter2519 9 місяців тому
Honestly same, too much description of one scene tends to make my mind wander, which is probably the reason why most stories are a mix of showing and telling in the first place. However, almost every English teacher that I’ve met, eats up those Romanticism/Shakespeare plays like candy. An audience for everything it seems.
@czwartek565 2 роки тому
5:53 Use evidence 7:21 Concrete no Abstract 10:13 Specific sensory 12:15 Thought and verbs better than Body language. 15:32 Dialog 17:52 Narrator voice 24:03 When you can tell
@mariared1670 2 роки тому
Concrete no abstract justu!!
@Mii.. Рік тому
@@mariared1670 Lmao
@m47kr3nt0n Рік тому
Dude bless you
@bluebellbeatnik4945 Рік тому
thank you, i have adhd and no patience
@net_lag Рік тому
Maybe it's the lack of sleep but I felt like every "bad" examples shown in this video did a better job of conveying the story..
@acandybar283 3 роки тому
this made me open up a word document, then realize after staring at the blank page for a while that i still can't write
@QuotidianWriter 3 роки тому
Just go for it! Write first, edit later. Don't overthink it. Pretend that it's something you'll never show to anybody except for yourself. And keep writing. :)
@c.9231 3 роки тому
LOL, you can write comedy!
@jeremias-serus 2 роки тому
Ok to be fair this comment was quite funny. You got a chuckle out of me
@jamiearnold1711 2 роки тому
Live in your imagination and write something that you would want to read yourself.
@CoachSarahC 2 роки тому
Sounds like a great opener 😉
@octaiii6553 3 роки тому
“The forest hummed of the cries of children long dead.” Okay, maybe too eerie.
@destiny-jo6td 2 роки тому
fr my first thought was, “that was dark.”
@adeleaslan8182 2 роки тому
Yeah but it was really good
@miwwie1504 2 роки тому
If it sounds like it's too much then try to get rid of the purple prose.
@immaculateorganicsoaps3533 2 роки тому
Just a little
@tink268 2 роки тому
❤
@skeletonshorror5184 Рік тому
“Showing dramatizes and telling summarizes” is the smartest thing I’ve heard about writing. 💀🔥
@arunashinde2462 2 роки тому
I believe that using the telling method in a conveyable way is a skill. These days, I've read a lot of work online where writers believe that being metaphoric or philosophical and describing every emotion too specifically makes their writing look mature. I too believed that earlier. And tbh I've read a few works which were absolutely amazing with this method. Because the plot suited it. Not every plot needs the same writing method. If JK Rowling used that specific method, I wonder how long Harry Potter would have been.
@helenasvachova444 Рік тому
I agree. Gabriel García Márquez relies almost completely on telling and his books are superb. One should always take any writing advice with a grain of salt, and also keep in mind that writing is also subject to trends and fashion.
@justanomorifan3059 Рік тому
I like describing characters emotions straight up somtimes. Especially if it's serious. It's hard to try and show what's going on inside someone's head without directly hearing the raw emotion.
@TimGreig Рік тому
Totally agree. As I commented, It should be "Show AND tell"
@katgreer6113 11 місяців тому
Well the first two harry potter books are children's books so...no. I don't believe that would suit it well.
@thenoobalmighty8790 10 місяців тому
HARRY POTTER IS WACK 🤣
@tigolbittys4997 3 роки тому
Damn you’re really giving all this gold away for free
@SammyJ96 3 роки тому
That's one of the ways she gets her blessings.
@jchinckley 3 роки тому
Brandon Sanderson has been doing it for years. He's even getting more into it this year than before, probably because of the pandemic but still giving all his knowledge away for free on the internet. Unless you go to BYU. Then you have to pay for his class. But you can still watch it on UKposts for free after the fact.
@valeriej.brooks1344 3 роки тому
I suggest buying her a coffee or two!
@johannesdolch 3 роки тому
Welcome to Marketing 101
@WTHnada 3 роки тому
It’s so sweet! Most ppl make you pay 🥺
@karrin2002 3 роки тому
90% of wattpad aspiring writers need to watch this
@skyler9254 3 роки тому
Hi, I'm planning to write, is there any writing platform aside from wattpad and dreame?
@amysmithy3771 3 роки тому
I am an Wattpad writer. Or at least an wannabe writer...
@Kasiarzynka 3 роки тому
@@amysmithy3771 Saying you're a wannabe author is already putting more effort into self critique than your average stereotypical wattpad writer, lol. I mean that's a step in a good direction, I suppose.
@ironwracu5822 3 роки тому
@@skyler9254 scrivener for apple or windows...whichever you use
@sors2838 3 роки тому
@@amysmithy3771 either you are or you are not, if you write you are a writer if you want to be, if not you just aren't. Don't push yourself back by saying wannabe, just say you are. Advice from a spanish writter learning english (saying the last if there're any grammar issues with my comment)
@froggy3257 2 роки тому
I'm currently ten years old and aspire to be an authour. This video has helped me to really understand show not tell or whatever you want to call it. I truly believe in my dreams and have been told countless times that my talent is incredible or unbelievable but honestly I think I could improve by miles. This video was my first step towards making my dreams become a reality.
@lena_says Рік тому
I started writing really young too. The seeds were planted in my head from a young age, maybe around 3 or so. I vividly remember watching my sister write, and I was obsessed with books, video games, and anime. But reading your comment made me smile and remember when I started writing. At first, my writing was super bad, but it's gotten better over time. I'm 22 now, and although I cringe at my old writing, even when I was 16, it's still a great indicator of how much I've grown over the years just by trying and listening to people(like this video, for example). Remember that your writing style will likely adapt and grow with you as you age. Just never give up and understand that there is always learning to be done. Also, write because YOU love it. If you write with the intention of fame and money, you will likely give up along the way. But if you write because you love it, even if others "cringe," then you're fulfilling what's in your soul and heart and will become an unstoppable force. That's just my opinion. Either way, I think you'll do fine. Good luck! I hope your dream comes true.❤
@tonyisnotdead Рік тому
obviously you need to improve. people only tell you your writing is fantastic and priceless because you are 10 years old
@lena_says Рік тому
@@tonyisnotdead Not true. Leave the kid alone and go pick on someone your own age. You're acting odd and freaky. Stop it. This kid is doing better than you. Look at your comment's grammar, punctuation and spelling then look at theirs. They're doing just fine and will continue to grow and so will you. I'm 22, come at me, loser. Not at a child. What is wrong with you? That's a rhetorical question... They're on this video to learn, you're on this video to hate. You are NOT on their level.
@Wizkid_Utopia Рік тому
w dreams
@FBI-xf8tm Рік тому
@@tonyisnotdead what the fuck??
@ultrahotwings9738 Рік тому
Funny enough, when I first started writing, I did a lot of the things that were said. I cut my teeth in the fanfiction world, practicing showing concepts and not telling, based upon the books I grew up with and loved (and would lose myself to). I wanted to become a writer that my childhood self would have loved. Then I got to college creative writing classes in my community college and my professor slammed me for "purple prose" and being "too melodramatic" and that I had to "condense my thoughts"... that showing too much leads to disinterest from readers (he then cited Stephen King as the worst offender of said "overdescriptiveness"). Had another professor in my university days get on my case for using specific adjectives/verbs that had specific connotations saying nobody wanted to read a "SAT Hit Parade piece" and that simple and straightforward is better. Seeing this video is bittersweet, because it tells me... that writing is an art. My writing, nowadays, has become very technical and dry, devoid of emotion... and tells like a narration rather than a story. It makes me want to go back... but it also makes me feel sad that I gave up writing back then, because I felt I didn't have the talent or the skillset for it. Wish I could go back ten years and tell my younger self to not feel discouraged and want to quit being a writer just because two professors said so. Instead, find a style, craft it, hone it, stick with it, trim the fat, and develop. Wish I could take those ten years back.
@QuotidianWriter Рік тому
I hope you've been able to move forward with your writing and make up for that lost time by writing stories that feel true to you. ❤️
@IchNachtLiebe 2 місяці тому
For sure. I'm working on my debut novel right now. I have rewritten my first chapter a ton of time. This was all positive steps forward because I was very rusty. But, I remember thinking I wanted to write a novel when I was about 17. I had one professor give me nothing but compliments and an English college professor express that they hated the exact lines that the previous person loved. Same lines, polar opposite opinions. There are a few hard lines in writing. There is some obvious slop out there; however, in many cases rules should be broken sparingly.
@bradykwhite 2 місяці тому
That’s okay! Dont be to hard on yourself, you were just a kid! We are super susceptible to what teachers say when we’re that age. I have a similar story to you and I’m 24 and just now learning to be my own writer.
@marianazuniga5052 14 днів тому
This is so hard. Growing up I also experienced how one teacher would reprimand me for what another praised me for. How we write should never be judged. What matters is whether our writing is a true and authentic representation of who we are at that moment in time. This is what truly matters. As I wrote this, I fixed syntax and grammar so many times. Were I truly genuine, you would see the messy, disheveled comment of someone who’s too tired from work. But alas, writing is always an illusion. Best of luck to you on your journey. I wish you well.
@kelleren4840 3 роки тому
"You don't always need to show" *Tolkien:* Hold my pipe.
@sanityone649 3 роки тому
I agree. Only showing...makes for too much flowery prose. Ugh. There must be some telling...and some showing...and finding that mix is what makes for a successful read. It's up to the author to figure out where showing or telling works best...or together. Generally, if it sounds good...creates a picture in the reader's mind...then it's acceptable. I think some readers are just fine with telling...and are plenty satisfied on the minimalist side of showing...while others are not.
@machiavellbritish5404 3 роки тому
hahah hilarious
@mariajames-thiaw5797 3 роки тому
LOL!
@lesath7883 3 роки тому
Well, of course. But he was Tolkien. I don't plan on emulating him.
@dariusga6752 3 роки тому
I mean, its not always to do showing. Telling was also important too! So try to balance it
@dreamer7646 3 роки тому
The simplest way (for me at least) is to read through what I wrote and imagine I'm watching a movie and ask myself: am I seeing/feeling these images myself or there's a voice over/narrator explaining what is happening in the scene. Then my telling will turn to showing
@LuisHernandez-sk3dm 3 роки тому
I'm not a writer but this totally make sense!
@chronologizer422 3 роки тому
@@LuisHernandez-sk3dm It really does! I've given myself some experience in screenplay, and this links with me.
@Drc902 3 роки тому
I try to do it that way too. Makes the transition to showing much easier.
@sylvainstoneking3109 3 роки тому
Thats actually really good advice!
@improvementrevolution6607 2 роки тому
Don't ALWAYS show.
@user-ut5zg5cv5b 15 днів тому
I just wanted to make a list sooo ●you gotta show when it's about emotions, opinions and sensations ●use evidence to show:don't just say this character is kind, what prove that this character is kind? ●don't use verbs like (thinks-knows-understands-realizes-believes-wants-remembers-imagines) ●don't say the character feelings directly, describe it so the reader feel it to ●read about body language of different emotions, but don't rely too much on it ●try engaging different and unique senses ●show emotions through dialogue ●don't use too much adverbs ●sometimes it's better to just tell(if it's not that important of a scene) |writing exercise| take a paragraph or a scene and try rewrite all the telling to showing
@royalteaanimations Рік тому
The issue with a lot of advice when it comes to creative mediums is that it’s all so vague. “Show don’t tell” has always been one of the infamous ones. But this video is perfect. It narrows down what exactly that means, gives examples, and some phrases/hacks for writing it ❤
@BazColne 6 місяців тому
Amen.
@ambinintsoahasina 3 роки тому
I'm afraid of overdoing it, or doing it so wrong that it would be boring
@ratherpro1222 3 роки тому
Me too
@527398 3 роки тому
For me the best way to "check" whether it's bad or good (or passable because I'm a perfectionist at heart and never contented with my own writing) is to re-read what's written and if I start skipping some parts, then meybe it's better to delete them. If YOU of all people get bored, then change this part. After all, you're the person you're writing for first and foremost.
@ambinintsoahasina 3 роки тому
@@527398 great advice! thanks
@ratherpro1222 3 роки тому
@@alisonargayosa7729 exactly and ideas it's so hard to make it new and unique it's take months to show it than i think that's not enough
@thedeadcannotdie 3 роки тому
@@alisonargayosa7729 that's what beta readers are for
@AnaPaula-vk3bs 3 роки тому
I didn't know why my writing was sounding too melodramatic, until this video show me that I was relying too much on body language. A new window opened to me after this. Thank you so much!
@lancevoltron3585 3 роки тому
For real. This got me too.
@Scarletraven87 3 роки тому
The most extreme disagreements have zero body language.
@blackhagalaz 3 роки тому
Preach! This hit me hard too. I don't know I am a person that tends to observe the expressions and bodylanguage of others very closely. Maybe that's why? Others may not observe this directly and just unconsciously. So writing it down like we observe it feels over the top for most people.
@fatimasubhan8282 2 роки тому
@@carsanovadidrifto800 Why would you reply this? It has nothing to do with the video or the original comment, plus not everyone is Christian or Catholic
@carribbeannatural4736 2 роки тому
SAMEEE😭😭
@chasehughesofficial 2 роки тому
this is a criminally underrated channel. Listened to you when writing my first fiction book. Now contracted to be a TV series. So thanks for making these.
@BazColne 6 місяців тому
Yay.
@i.am.arcana Рік тому
i can't believe this information is online for free right now. this video is a MASTERCLASS. so helpful.
@brendanm6921 2 роки тому
This video is basically just nearly half an hour of me being told why my story is shit and that is just wonderful! Tons of great teaching here.
@RepublicConstitution 2 роки тому
I can promise you, if you stick to the rules of this video, you'll never be a success. Never.
@protorhinocerator142 2 роки тому
But also because you're as bad at analogies as an I don't know what.
@brendanm6921 2 роки тому
@@protorhinocerator142 this comment doesn't even contain any analogies. The hell are you talking about?
@protorhinocerator142 2 роки тому
@@brendanm6921 That was the point. Earth humor.
@TT-pl5iw 2 роки тому
@@RepublicConstitution Then what, in your view, is the correct methodology? It's one thing to criticize, it's another to show a better path.
@flipfloppoet4377 3 роки тому
I once read this advice somewhere: When you're done with your work, count the number of times you have used "was". Edit your work to reduce that number by half.
@Brindlebrother 3 роки тому
What if the count is an odd number? OH GOD WHAT IF IT'S AN ODD NUMBERR!?
@srj34 3 роки тому
@@Brindlebrother Find a sentence like this in your draft, and do this to it: BEFORE: What hit me *was* feeling that I'd never get over her. AFTER: What hit me, *a* feeling that I'd never get over her? Now you can eliminate half of the rest!
@stickman3208 3 роки тому
One more thing, read through and everytime you see the word "thing", write a new way to say it excluding the word.
@CoachSarahC 2 роки тому
@@Brindlebrother i hope you’re not waiting with baited breath!
@stevecarter8810 2 роки тому
@@srj34 then edit again to remove the comma splice, I hope?
@silverfire27 Рік тому
I like this video because it actually has examples and reasoning. So many advice giving youtubers just say things they've heard before. I love that you've obviously done your homework and teach about writing rather than giving some sort of list of tips or some such thing. Awesome video.
@gabrieleriva_bboykappside 7 місяців тому
One thing I love about stories in books is I always visualize the scene in my head and it's stuck. I probably have a clear view on how the coastline looks like, how the hotel rooms are built, how characters feel things, sometimes it's so well written i even deduce things that weren't even talked about. That's when I know a story can be magnetic and engaging to me, I personally love to feel taken hand by hand to the place so I can see it myself
@lindabb7064 3 роки тому
I showed the first two pages of my book to a friend, he told me it felt like in a movie. That was the best compliment ever! 😊
@edwwi 2 роки тому
@Miles Doyle okay but who asked?
@edwwi 2 роки тому
@@carsanovadidrifto800 Who asked?
@pixiewings21_9 2 роки тому
@ Carsonova etc. 🤣🤣🤣 congrats! You just wrote the biblical themed, UKposts post version of War & Peace. Ever heard of less is more? Didn't think so.
@shammu9321 2 роки тому
@@carsanovadidrifto800 idk
@Meimoons 2 роки тому
@@edwwi Ignore them, they’re bots.
@readingontherun4677 3 роки тому
Currently as a book reviewer, in my opinion the 2+2 method also lets the reader make the story partly their own, inserting details based on their own experiences. This draws them deeper into the story. By far one of the best approaches!
@anniefh7399 3 роки тому
Thanks for this. You summed up 'show' perfectly. Now I understand. I'm sure I've read /heard many explanations for its purpose, but yours is the best. Your language is direct and few words used! Excellent! Not deriding Diane - she used her brilliant mind to explain HOW to do it and I am eternally grateful to her for that.
@SysterYster 2 роки тому
Yes, too many people overexplain things too much. :)
@ameliaross854 2 роки тому
Yes, this is what exactly I do. But i have problems to do it in English since it's not my first langguage. But whenever i write in my native language, it went very smooth and i'm very enjoy my writtings. Well i guess i need to truly learn english again 😅
@nadiasanz3779 2 роки тому
@@ameliaross854 what's your native language?
@ameliaross854 2 роки тому
@@nadiasanz3779 Malaysia 😁😊
@themadoneplays7842 2 роки тому
Well, the one thing I learned is that sometimes It's okay to tell, not every character emotion cue has to be delivered with nine hundred paragraphs. Sometimes simplicity is a good thing, especially if you want to create a fast pace. Sometimes showing can get long-winded and is more useful for melodramas as opposed to something more action oriented like what I am writing.
@trojan9838 Рік тому
That's genius. I never thought of writing being so interesting. Really made me realise why I didn't like some novels and loved others.
@alex36265503 3 роки тому
For my style, a mix between telling and showing is the ideal form. I mean, there is a trade-off between clarity, with a straightforward depiction, and enticement, with a decorated description. When you swap "Suzie was blind" for "Suzie felt for the bench with a white cane" the passage becomes more vivid and enigmatic. That is surely good sometimes but it can also get confusing or annoying. It would be tiring for your audience to puzzle out the meaning of every sentence, their attention could diverge from the really meaningful stuff on your story. Thus, only the important events - the ones which develop characters or push the plot - should be communicated with such intensity. Its almost like poetry versus report... one has to know when is best to use each, cause when writing, the points you emphasize influences what people apprehend from the narrative. People wanna know why are you telling them this story. Show what compels you.
@emilylol2629 2 роки тому
That example made me realize how hard it would be to write from a blind persons perspective- the lack of color and relying on other senses etc
@rekthvx8173 2 роки тому
AGREED-
@AxeltheWolf16 2 роки тому
@D Frazier I just want to say thank you for this, truly. It reinforces that yes, my writing isn't exactly up to par with others who are more than likely in a league far beyond my own, and that's okay! I'm still learning and growing to create my own style and unique-ness. I've had a few friends give me advice on what to do and how to do it, and honestly all it did was leave me feeling down and out, the fun of what I do not being within me anymore. That is, until recently I decided to say 'screw it!' and do my own thing. Now I'm much happier.
@emilydean568 2 роки тому
I completely agree with the idea of showing what compels you, as once in an English class we read a novel where one of the central characters was killed, but as the author had showed us in a way that was quite abstract and obscure, at first we did not realise that is what had happened and had to spend a while going over it for it to make sense. I don't think it would've been better if the writer had told us that's what was happening, but the meaning was buried so deep that he lost us as an audience. So I definetely think there's a balance between show and tell, and being careful not to go overboard either way.
@Patapon1222 2 роки тому
THANK YOU I'm quite tired with books with too much of flowery proses and pages, that describes one particular corner of the world in 5 pages. It feels tiring to read it, as you're working your brains out on realizing whether or not it's already over or the book had moved on to another particular corner
@ummqudamah 3 роки тому
"Whatever you do, keep writing." Thank you so much, that part really helped
@charliewest1221 9 місяців тому
The great 19th century novelists (English, French, Russian, American) did alot of "telling". Their works are timeless masterpieces.
@RS-xx9ve 6 місяців тому
Correct. The above is how English teachers and "writing teachers" make a living. People don't always want to re-read and "solve a puzzle". I prefer writing to be powerful, creating an impression as you go along. Yes layering is a skill but "show, don't tell" is a highly overused mantra, and regularly misapplied. The work students discuss in English Lit classes is NOT generally the greatest work.
@syedhasnainali8282 4 місяці тому
factss
@liegeman717 2 роки тому
I so needed this! (Telling?). I stifled the hundredth yawn as I struggled to understand how to decipher which path my writing had taken. Was I telling or showing? Exhaustion threatened as I poured over unfulfilling sources to find the elusive answer. “Could I trust this post? Would it leave me hungry for more?” It did not! I devoured every example, repeating them over and over. I blinked. My quest had ended. Leaning back into the comforting cushions of my armchair, a small tear formed at the corner of one of my reddened eyes. It sidled its way halfway down my cheek before I wiped at it with the back of my painful key pushing hand. (showing?) Wow, just writing this silly comment proved to me how much work I need to do! Thanks for this video!
@ladyblubel 3 роки тому
I think my biggest issue with writing is falling too much into “default” actions when writing emotion. I’ve decided that journaling my experiences, regardless of the emotion, really helps in creating a reference to use because emotions are so varied and you can cycle through them
@neghiethervil5606 2 роки тому
Such a good idea. I set out last year to make my readers cry and I've succeeded. I get off on it I think. LOL! It's so much more work, but what's the point of writing if not to move people in whatever way right?
@samirabouchta9390 Рік тому
@Neghie Thervil . Hi, that'll be weird I've never done this before. So that's really what I want ...I want my readers to cry or at least feel for my main character but it's kinda hard gor me to do so ... can I ask since I don't have anyone ...what makes a reader feel the "traps" "the never things gonna workout for fl no matter what he does" " bad for her" ... oe at least what to search if you have any ideas pls 🙏
@FacundoComix 3 роки тому
The best writing channel by far. Every video is a special event.
@cheddieplayz2788 3 роки тому
100% I always come here and suggest these videos to my friends
@RFazor 3 роки тому
I just came across this channel for the first time. I agree with you. Hands down, this is the best writing channel on the web!!!
@gabrielp9646 3 роки тому
Every writing channel I follow is filled with comments of people saying: "The best writing channel on UKposts...", and stuff like that.
@FacundoComix 3 роки тому
@@gabrielp9646 obviously it can only be true about this one...
@RFazor 3 роки тому
@@gabrielp9646Yiz. But this channel is the best.
@leonardobertella6380 2 роки тому
This video alone helped me more than a semester did back in my school. Your job is flawless. Thank you so much for your help, and know it makes a huge impact in my writing and scenes development.
@LeannLeannProduction 6 днів тому
This is the most respectful description/guide to "show, don't tell" I've ever seen. It's something I've always struggled with, because nobody could ever explain it to me in a way that 'clicked', yet everyone INSISTS on show over tell. The fact that you even give examples of telling used well is such a relief to me. Instinctually I've known that it's not always necessary to 'show', but I needed an expert to finally confirm it. Thank you!
@nemanja98rs 3 роки тому
As a novice writer what I like to do is pay attention to what the characters would. We usually don't notice some things but focus on the others, so I like to show what the characters are seeing
@anniefh7399 3 роки тому
Hmmm ... such a very good point. Otherwise, we're just writing what we see. Thank you for this comment.
@nemanja98rs 3 роки тому
@@anniefh7399 you're welcome
@hendragunawantbi2906 2 роки тому
I thinking the same thing
@aureliaavalon 2 роки тому
That's good advice. A strong instance of this is in Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun. It's a romantic comedy where every 4 panels of the manga contain some sort of punchline from some sort of misunderstanding that the characters frequently have, but gekkan shoujo actually makes these misunderstandings hilarious because we're seeing it all but the innocent character is confused as they see only a part of it, a tool of dramatic irony. For example, main character talks about an idea for their comic with his neighbour but a side character crushing on that neighbour overhears, and thought their boss was a normal manager by day but a stripper working in a gay bar by night. They weren't even talking about bars or strippers.
@nemanja98rs 2 роки тому
@@aureliaavalon this is why I love the writing community. Nobody is trying to keep things to themselves, when we have ideas we share and discuss them
@xChikyx 3 роки тому
sometimes I prefer telling, especially when the author's showing is WAY too exaggerated, to the point that it almost looks like purple prose
@Myllkka 3 роки тому
Me too, telling doesn't sound bad all the time. I think balance is good, not just one or the other all the time.
@TheRedHaze3 3 роки тому
I would say if you think there's been too much showing, it's probably just information that does not need to be conveyed to the reader, rather than a section where it would have been better to tell.
@muhlenstedt 3 роки тому
Yes, showing can be too detailed, long and tiresome
@apsararodrigo9338 3 роки тому
Some writers do convey a good story by telling. For example J.K Rowling and Jane Austen are famous tellers. It really depends on the story and the reader.
@RSEFX 3 роки тому
I've felt for some time we've given way to visual purple prose.
@theoryofpersonality1420 Рік тому
Never underestimate the power of telling a story. If everyone wrote like this it would be a sad world indeed. Not every story is intended to be a screen play. There's theater and then there is storytelling. Not everyone likes theater.
@thehangingparsiple5692 11 місяців тому
You're taking it too literally. Good storytelling IS theatre, because it's a very similar art.
@kayzeaza 10 місяців тому
What they’re saying here is to have a blend of the two! I bet your stories suck
@Klaus-ku3xd Рік тому
In simple words describe emotion like "Tears were rolling down his cheek". You simply just have to show an emotion but not say what your character is feeling
@LaurArt_UK 3 роки тому
My book has too many raised eyebrows and 'their heart beat faster'. I need more ways of showing XD
@c.9231 3 роки тому
Instead of a raised eyebrow: Delia snorted in disbelief. Literally snorted. She was glad her mama wasn't around to hear, but she couldn't help herself. Jackson's story grew more far-fetched every time he told it. Instead of a fast beating heart: " He came right up to me! " "No! What'd you do?" "I broke out in a sweat, of course. We're talking major waterworks. I had to keep my arms at my side the whole time! Why did I have to wear white silk today of all days? " "Oh, Sue. "
@animationlabz8990 2 роки тому
There's a book called the emotion thesarus. It's basically a thesarus of different stuff your character can do when irriated, scared, angery and more. Maybe that could help give some variation.
@piksween5075 2 роки тому
@@c.9231 you make it kinda funny to imagine. It's like that "She near inhaled the soup" but for everything
@RicardoAGuitar 2 роки тому
Try raising the heart and having the eyebrows beat faster
@princessthyemis 2 роки тому
Me too!!!
@maddiehad 3 роки тому
showing someone is friendly : oh hi Mark.
@emiliam2279 2 роки тому
ah yes...someone quoting the room in the comment section of a video essay on writing. Perfection.
@EmmarainePink Рік тому
That "writers are usually in a hurry" is actually my problem, I'm so glad I watched this video. I've been trying to "slow it down" but I have no idea how to and I didn't understand why it felt so rushed.
@Ajihatzhu 2 роки тому
This is the first of all these writing tip videos that is ACTUALLY helpful. The given examples and your pace of explaining really helps me understanding. I can really improve my writing from this, you've earned yourself a sub
@GJ11266 2 роки тому
The struggle with me regarding “Show, don’t tell” is that I live using auditory sensory input. I’m totally blind, so I struggle with showing characters’ face expressions and body language a lot. I tend to not use a lot of visuals in my writing for that reason.
@QuotidianWriter 2 роки тому
The tone of the dialogue or the rhythm of the prose can say a lot without needing any visuals at all! I once wrote a story where all smells were described in terms of tactile sensations, and that made the sensory details more vivid, in a way.
@RepublicConstitution 2 роки тому
Here is some better advice then: tune in to weird fiction. Get someone to help you find Horrorbabble on UKposts and then you can listen to hundreds of great stories that destroy this "show, don't tell" nonsense.
@susanscott8653 Рік тому
Great! Use what you know of using your other senses to understand people and situations. Your narrative voice will be original.
@my_girl_seraphine5294 Рік тому
I do this too
@isaace.olivasgonzalez9603 Рік тому
Mane if you blind how tf did you type this?
@freeblom 3 роки тому
"Sometimes authors present information like a dictionary definition, rather than an in-world reference that fits naturally into the story" That's super helpful thank you so much!!
@CraigsOverijse 13 днів тому
I really appreciated that this video was not full of adverts made it very easy to follow.
@benamos3833 Рік тому
I have watched this video at least a dozen times. It is one of the definitive videos on UKposts on showing not telling. Simple yet profound with plenty of examples. Its changing my writing one paragraph at a time
@cjpreach 3 роки тому
I record the audio from ALL of Diane's videos, then listen to them during my 16-18 weekly work commute hours. She reminds me that even I can improve my writing, and it's not absurd to believe that others will enjoy and benefit from the story when I finally present it to the world. Another home run, Diane. Thank you for the obvious extra effort.
@inkfeats1143 3 роки тому
I thought I knew the differences between showing and telling. While I did know some of comparisons that you discuss, I learned more and even better how to use the distinctions in my writing. I also really liked that you explained the “why” behind showing vs telling. Why not give out the info straightforward and simple? Because that takes the fun out of the game of reading. Thanks!
@futurestoryteller 2 роки тому
Really this whole video demonstrates that from inception this advice could have been narrowed down to "Don't just tell me, tell me why."
@unholyknightwhowanttowield5522 Рік тому
First of all, I can't tell you just how glad I'm when I stumbled through this video. I have been searching a lot of guides and tips just to find the answer of why my writings felt so stiff despite being so elaborate and fanciful. Since my english education as a non-native speaker is pretty much informal, I always thinks that my problem is just my lack of vocabulary, so this video is really, really a great help for me. Once again, thank you!
@QuotidianWriter Рік тому
Thank you so much for watching and commenting! I'm glad to hear that it unlocked something for you. Keep writing! :)
@ScootaLoodem 2 роки тому
I have watched countless videos on the show don't tell rule, but by far, this is the one that resonated with me the most and made me more or less understand the concept. I struggle with that a lot. Thanks!
@user-oy4vu3ck3u 3 роки тому
My favourite writing tip is learn the rules before you break them. You can't subvert expectations unless you know what's expected
@johndavenport8843 3 роки тому
You have given some crumbs, some slices and some the whole loaf here. We all took something away from this. Bravo and Thank you!
@keithnimmo 9 місяців тому
This video is going to be the reason bad writers become good ones, you captured so much in 27 minutes. I am blown away.
@notgate2624 Рік тому
The number of sources and examples is incredible! Very well researched.
@brissanEXE 3 роки тому
"Chuck Pumpernickle" busted my chops unexpectedly
@jjgavilano 3 роки тому
i laughed so hard at that
@starsinmybrain 3 роки тому
I paused it and came to the comments to see if anyone noticed. I’ll continue now. 😂
@brianaberry6494 2 роки тому
I'm trying to figure out if she was being serious.... like.... really?!
@joeldrummond6058 3 роки тому
What a magnificent little manual on the ofttimes confusing distinctions between "showing, not telling", Diane! I have never seen it so clearly laid out. "Show, don't tell." is repeated in the writing community about as often as "All writing is re-writing." so much so that it is easy for writers of all levels to get down on themselves for not knowing how to do this thing that is apparently such "common knowledge" that they, (the confused writer) should apparently just know how to do it; when nothing could be further from the truth. Like most things in life, the knowledge of how to "show, not tell" is not innate--it is a skill--which fortunately means that it can be learned. With this video, you have made learning how to do so much more accessible to those of us who struggle with this issue. God bless you for making it, Diane! "Smooth seas do not make skilled sailors." African proverb
@IMinusWell Рік тому
THANK YOU, I've been trying my best to figure out how to tell something without giving too much and this video gave me just what I needed. There's so much to take from this.
@TheAniketj 11 місяців тому
These are golden essential guidlines for struggling writers like us.
@mattymcfabb 3 роки тому
Let the character’s emotions Color the way they see the world ✨
@saetainlatin 3 роки тому
Jesus!, with these techniques, you can make narrating "how the grass grows" entertaining
@17smadonna20 3 роки тому
ikkk
@c.9231 3 роки тому
Abundant rain this year meant the grass on this particular African plain was tall and thick. It swayed in the warm night breeze as we sat around the fire drinking "the good stuff" and listening to Frank's ribald jokes. It was when he froze mid-punchline, eyes fixated on the perimeter, that we realized something more than the wind moved through that grass.
@improvementrevolution6607 2 роки тому
@@c.9231 , said David Attenborough.
@destiny-jo6td 2 роки тому
FR LMAO
@funkuro 2 роки тому
@@c.9231 that sounds great. You should definitely make a book.
@hexusziggurat 2 роки тому
Thanks Dianne. I'm very new to this and your kind words at the end are quite heartfelt, "keep writing".
@robertfairbrother4004 10 місяців тому
I have spent three years on three courses and this half an hour video has done the best job of bringing home the meaning of 'Show, don't Tell' - a truly excellent job. And so timely as I am going through an edit of my first novel. I think I have a better chance of getting out what is in my head. Thank you so much.
@MrSegrist 2 роки тому
I've been teaching Creative Writing at a high school for ten years, and this video is one of the best instructional videos I've seen. My students really benefited from your examples.
@sweep8311 3 роки тому
This is exactly the video I needed, I'm looking back at my old writing and realizing how much "telling" I did rather than "showing". Ever since following this advice I find it so much easier to immerse myself into what my characters might be thinking or feeling, and it's easier for me to fill out pages. Thank you so much!
@madisonburke3588 Рік тому
This was so helpful, thank you! I’ve been feeling like I’m lacking that intense emotion in my writing. Looking forward to going back through and applying some of these tips.
@Sageman101 3 роки тому
Each time I come to this topic, the advice lends to the problem that most of us writers must face. We are initially obsessed with putting our very images into the reader's head. The reality is this will never happen. It is the cost of art. The sooner we stop chasing the fantasy, the more evocative our writing naturally becomes.
@DarbriaSMoon 3 роки тому
This spoke volumes to me. I really need to read books more that provokes emotions, setting the scene where I escape reality. I seriously put my remote work on hold to listen to this insightful video. Thank you for your tips and helpful advice.
@Mii.. Рік тому
Do you know any books I can read that makes you escape reality? Like feeling the characters emotions, etc?
@victoriapassmore8567 2 роки тому
Thank you for this. I take notes on your UKposts videos to make myself a better writer and I've already seen loads of improvement. YOU ROCK!
@daveshif2514 29 днів тому
knowing what to avoid and when to avoid it was exactly the advice a video like this needs to have, thank you!
@mc95 2 роки тому
I’m a teller who wants to learn the art of showing through well-crafted words. In the past decade, I’ve mostly written academic papers, pleadings, and research. The transition is overwhelming at times, but I know I can get there with persistence and hard work.
@mrolaniytimi 9 місяців тому
Glossary of eminent journals in my shelf, stacked up in twenty’s and five rows. Hardly will you find one without my my name engraved in gold ink. 22 years as the editor academic Journal on abstraction and showing. I exhibit about 120 articles and research works in funky blogs yearly! I’m a teller by trade, i observe, deduce and inform on fact. I tell, but it doesn’t go far. Never really catch on, few eyes know the worth. But kow, I want my audience to see words and read flowing thoughts, I want to be an artist, I want to take them on a journey they can follow. I want to show. I want them to see for them selves. 🙏
@MashAllahMari 9 місяців тому
I feel the same way coming from academic papers and persuasive writing
@etoileslanuit 2 роки тому
I always send my drafts to the people who read the most out of my friends and family. One of them being my mother who’s extremely critical when it comes to me and my writing or dancing. The other person being my best friend, probably my biggest fan, who’s not only immensely good with wording and handling emotional topics but also knows that I can accept and love to hear criticism. I’m very thankful for her. She’s not judging me for spending most of our time talking about my story and my characters and my favourite story lines and how I create families and their crests and how their powers work and how they perceive love and affection. And, of course, how I love to make them suffer. I don’t know why I just wrote all this down. It has nothing to do with the video but I just had the urge to write this down. Thank you for your attention.
@waggishsagacity7947 11 місяців тому
Laura: There is no substitute to effective critiquing than a first/second draft GREAT editor. I know of 2.
@thenoobalmighty8790 10 місяців тому
Laura: Get a job. You will never be a writer 😂
@ballatv_ent8515 Рік тому
This video is with great details and information. I appreciated finding your page. I do struggle with showing than telling. And this showed me clearly how to fix this thank you.
@267UTP 5 місяців тому
Three years later, the info in your video still rings true. Thank you, I needed this! ❤
@Arashinx 3 роки тому
I just KNOW I'm gonna watch this video a shit ton of times
@sqdtnz 3 роки тому
Haven't finished the entire video yet, but what I feel is the overarching idea, is that as a writer we must imagine how something we want to express should be filmed without voice-over. We are basically creating a visual picture (and yes, also some sounds, smell, taste, etc.) For me the main challenge with this is always to remember it, and to keep using it.
@MrParkerman6 3 роки тому
No.
@selftaughtkh Рік тому
Found your channel today through this video. Love your content. Clear, precise, well-referenced, and very insightful.
@lesleymathews8786 Рік тому
excellent class. Even as a published author I needed to refresh myself with showing not telling. It's helped immensely. thank you.
@ambinintsoahasina 3 роки тому
This video is God-sent. I began writing this month. Never checked on how to write yet and still your videos appeared in my recommendations.
@c.9231 3 роки тому
Cool!
@josephcillojr.7035 3 роки тому
I am working on a dystopian fantasy where a highly-sheltered girl with an education based on encyclopedias published in the 1980's is forced out into a future world. Telling the story in the first-person allows the reader to discover the world as she does, but many of the details of the how the world works must be told to her by other characters. My early draft has some long dialog passages which I am working to break up to be more natural, but I'm finding it a challenge to show things that ground the action and give understanding of the environment. I'm thinking now it may be better to leave it mysterious. But I'm finding it a particular challenge to write in first-person and convey details of an unfamiliar social structure without a good bit of telling. The narrator would have no way of seeing the scenes that would show many details. In real life, we learn many things by being told, not shown, which is why we have textbooks and classrooms. But I don't think readers want to sit through a history class. And the fun of the story is discovering the world as the character discovers it. I'm working on getting the right balance. I have to rethink how much is really essential for the reader to know.
@Kitsambler 3 роки тому
How much - and when. When keeps readers turning the page is wanting to find out.
@GPalem 3 роки тому
One trick some authors use is: shift the narration perspective. In other words, it is ok to have multiple first-person views (each in its own different chapter, of-course).
@winnmiller6012 3 роки тому
I'm thinking your story might come out better if it was told in the third person. Because then the narrator could know and tell things that your main character wouldn't have to know or even know beforehand. Good luck! 😊
@GPalem 3 роки тому
@@winnmiller6012 That's a very good suggestion.
@gurjindersingh3843 3 роки тому
@@winnmiller6012 That is true but he must limit exposition dump despite the narrative style.
@DC-sk8jr 2 роки тому
First, thank you for putting this together. As a beginner writer, videos such as this are invaluable to have some spot in that huge sea of ideas on writing. You can easily get swept away moving from one topic to another. It can be very confusing, but over time, like other learning, starts to make sense. This video covers a lot, but is arranged so that with time and practice, will become second nature. I will start that goal by completing your writing assignment and see how it goes. Again, thank you for sharing your knowledge.
@Itstwofourteen 3 роки тому
"Umm Kevin, where'd you earned to make bombs?" "The Navy." That shit made me laugh 😅
@ndumisomsomi9053 2 роки тому
Right? 🤣🤣
@amiguitasprint6190 3 роки тому
At 17, I wrote poetry. Now I write short stories. I'm not good at it, but your video helped me see a better way to write. Thank you for taking the time to make this video. I will edit, rewrite and rewrite again.
@dreamysaidso Рік тому
This is probably the key thing that's felt wrong with my writing, that I wasn't able to pinpoint until now. Thank you for the video!
@leahgodson2319 2 роки тому
Watching again one year later and still amazed. This lesson is packed with actionable tips; thank you Diane.
@QuotidianWriter 2 роки тому
Thank you so much for your kind words, Leah! Keep writing! :)
@xXsnowberrieXx 3 роки тому
Dang, this video was extremely clear and easy to understand. As a very novice writer, some writing advice are difficult for me to follow, but this had very specific advice that I can actually implement.
@sofienummers 2 роки тому
Very informative
@chiron13 Рік тому
A few moments into this video, I decided to watch it till the end, but i did something better, I listened till the very end. You are truly an expert.
@gurjindersingh3843 3 роки тому
Telling: "We did not have much rain this year" Showing: The Clouds were as dry as the Star that kept them warm.
@dadaeeaeeadada3301 3 роки тому
The weather remind me that I haven't bath for months
@BioniclesaurKing4t2 3 роки тому
Being creative: "More of the same this week as we head into record low rainfalls for the fourth straight month," said the weatherman, standing next to a line of sun icons. Matt clicked off the TV and turned the thermostat down another two degrees.
@SuchingYan 3 роки тому
What?
@c.9231 3 роки тому
This might be the year that finally breaks them, Jake thought. Their farm had survived reversals before, but now the cracked earth looked like a jigsaw puzzle and corn stalks crunched beneath his boots as he strode across the formally green fields.
@brighteyes3445 3 роки тому
I would like to write a book but I'm not good at showing.
@jackmulcahy3976 3 роки тому
This is the best, clearest explanation of showing rather than telling that I've ever seen. I finally understand the concept! Thank you, Diane Callahan!
@danieljackson654 Рік тому
How Wonderful. Thank you. I struggle, at this writing, with a difficult scene, necessary to further the story; yet filled with emotion for the character who links different settings. This helps.
@alduinfeetpic9250 Рік тому
4 Minutes in, already learned something valuable. Thank you kindly
@sea4851 3 роки тому
I love how well researched and organized this video is. I even caught myself jumping between emotions as you presented the different examples. I am sure this will help me a lot. Thank you.
@blackhagalaz 3 роки тому
Man this is so helpful thank you! My problem is while I studied at University I had to write so much analytical, explicit stuff, that I sometimes catch myself writing my novel as meticulously orchestrated, and cross referenced, like a scientific paper. I am trying very hard to avoid that, and your advice was so good, that I now know what to look for. Thank you!
@anniefh7399 3 роки тому
I certainly understand this. I then went on to writing formal language in my employment roles. I am now re-learning how to write imaginatively, narratively.
@garyhughes1664 Рік тому
I came across this video by accident, enjoyed watching it and, in the process, learned a great deal about writing. Thx for sharing.
@kalienergy Рік тому
I have trouble comprehending what i read. Watching this inspires me to read novels. Thank you for the great content!
@mrdylag8098 3 роки тому
For what it's worth, I think it's perfectly fine to tell. Dickens and Poe told us all kinds of things and they did just fine. . .
@anniefh7399 3 роки тому
I do agree. Nowadays, thought, this type of writing seems to be less popular . Access to e-media is prevalent and, as someone noted above or somewhere, attention spans are shortening. I have a 7month old grandson whose mother put her phone with Pepper Pig playing to soothe him. He was upset and grizzly because he had a fever. I don't object to that, perse, but was shocked that this was actually an option. It has just occurred to me that showing (visualising) might be a way of lengthening the attention span. That'd be a wonderful thing.
@ElleDeas Рік тому
She says in the beginning telling is not a negative all on its own, but along with the right amount of showing, you’ll give your readers atrokger and more impactful connections to what’s happening in the story.
@RP-iq3fr 3 роки тому
What a well-researched, well-organized video. This is truly stunning.
@maureenseel118 Рік тому
This was actually really helpful. I know I have a tendency to do this, feeling like my world I'm creating is complicated and I have to spell it out for the reader. But really great works of fiction, sci-fi, fantasy, and dystopia have done it so well with so much less info-dumping. Thanks!
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